tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post5228243616076747055..comments2024-03-20T21:04:14.704+13:00Comments on Room 3 @ Wesley Primary School : Comic WPS Blogs Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04274680119331131439noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-40817709213549217292015-09-01T13:38:23.743+12:002015-09-01T13:38:23.743+12:00Hi Room 3! Wow what fantastic work!
We love your s...Hi Room 3! Wow what fantastic work!<br />We love your sounds in the bubbles and would love to see you use even more :-)<br />From Room 4 and Miss BoundRoom 4 Wesley Primaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10171052404061832382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-38857746334710024522015-08-28T15:54:34.400+12:002015-08-28T15:54:34.400+12:00Hi Antonio. Thanks for your comment! The website i...Hi Antonio. Thanks for your comment! The website is called Fotor, give it a try!Phil @ Ako Hikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08754203011097061842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-55272274350276348642015-08-28T14:38:25.907+12:002015-08-28T14:38:25.907+12:00Hi Room 3
I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I...Hi Room 3<br />I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I wanna know what is your learning focus and what website did you use to make that EPIC comicAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-59145077104315279662015-08-28T14:37:55.717+12:002015-08-28T14:37:55.717+12:00Hi Room 3
I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I...Hi Room 3<br />I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I wanna know what is your learning focus and what website did you use to make that EPIC comicAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-22763093451316237072015-08-03T10:56:30.658+12:002015-08-03T10:56:30.658+12:00Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another com...Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another comic because we might not be able to make another comic but,we will try our best.Thanks for giving me more work to work on and for the feed back.<br />Thanks:CarolineCarolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05450948679898341326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-27986163192112876242015-08-03T10:56:15.519+12:002015-08-03T10:56:15.519+12:00Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another com...Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another comic because we might not be able to make another comic but,we will try our best.Thanks for giving me more work to work on and for the feed back.<br />Thanks:CarolineCarolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05450948679898341326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-12147368299488821502015-08-03T10:50:29.002+12:002015-08-03T10:50:29.002+12:00Great work.I liked how how you used enough picture...Great work.I liked how how you used enough pictures in your comic and onomatopoeia's.<br />next time try to make the words big enough Viliamihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191451638685602197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-90019300281034416592015-08-03T10:48:17.523+12:002015-08-03T10:48:17.523+12:00Excellent work girls,I like the way you never used...Excellent work girls,I like the way you never used punctuation.punctuation. This reminds me of the time I made one.Can you make another page?It is really exciting.Tugihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13338753207669290687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-1317243199877176202015-08-03T10:46:37.884+12:002015-08-03T10:46:37.884+12:00Yes.Thank you Lucy.I think we did a good job but I...Yes.Thank you Lucy.I think we did a good job but I think everyone is right with their opinion I mean,we do need to work on the fonts,and we do need to work on the color and the contrast but,I still think we did a good job and we had that opportunity to put all our idea's into this comic strip to make it better and better each time but,thanks for the feed back.<br />Thanks:CarolineCarolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05450948679898341326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-49128298833373769342015-08-03T10:43:29.162+12:002015-08-03T10:43:29.162+12:00Great job and I liked the idea how you used yourse...Great job and I liked the idea how you used yourself for the photos instead of just finding random pictures to put on it.<br />What would you do if someone gave you a crystal for your birthday. d:D <br />by:MarickMarickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407236629756333497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-70469976253621213782015-08-03T10:35:48.760+12:002015-08-03T10:35:48.760+12:00Great work. I loved how you used high shots, low s...Great work. I loved how you used high shots, low shots and close ups. I enjoyed the part how Franzene was holding the diamond. It reminds me when I got a gift from my aunty. She gave me a box that was full of shiny diamonds. They were fake but I felt like they were real. Have you received a gift from anyone? Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13057298468584407738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-44874047278872328732015-07-30T09:49:41.979+12:002015-07-30T09:49:41.979+12:00nice work i like how you use onomatopoeia and back...nice work i like how you use onomatopoeia and back roundMafihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08996442572205810110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-40453505001477196872015-07-30T09:42:35.622+12:002015-07-30T09:42:35.622+12:00Good work i like how you used onomatopoeia and spe...Good work i like how you used onomatopoeia and speech bubble.But you try useing different fontFitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03176321180904931066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-37161033451719298902015-07-30T09:41:29.257+12:002015-07-30T09:41:29.257+12:00Love it!I think that this is a really good comic b...Love it!I think that this is a really good comic because,it shows to not steal and also has the onomatopoeia and speech bubbles to go with the comic.I think next time we need to work on making the writing more clearer and shorter.<br />Thanks<br />Caroline Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05450948679898341326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-37466766377827258192015-07-30T09:31:17.106+12:002015-07-30T09:31:17.106+12:00Good job I like the onomatopoeia but at the last p...Good job I like the onomatopoeia but at the last picture or the first I couldn't read the speech bubble Nathaniel uputauahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07483529537176206111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-84726207876147230332015-07-30T09:18:36.477+12:002015-07-30T09:18:36.477+12:00NICE WORK! yous guys did a great job on these comi...NICE WORK! yous guys did a great job on these comic strips I like the way yous used interesting pictures and different onomatopoeia next time yous should try not to use that much words but other than thath really great work keep it up Annie-Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05409391247310286314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-52170086420809928882015-07-28T10:51:19.129+12:002015-07-28T10:51:19.129+12:00l liked the way you used onomatopoeia,i think you ...l liked the way you used onomatopoeia,i think you should work on the font for the writing because it's kind of hard to tell whats happening,But besides that you did great! using the onomatopoeia on where it needs to be,for e.g.c your falling and you crash so you put crash where you fell.<br />By:Rachel.H Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631822744376251147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-70206582578159437462015-07-28T10:45:59.077+12:002015-07-28T10:45:59.077+12:00good work i like how you did different shots but m...good work i like how you did different shots but make the letters bigger so i can see but good work it was like a real comiccruzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09318901390803033755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-9859542055765094492015-07-27T12:03:49.197+12:002015-07-27T12:03:49.197+12:00Hi Room 3, we tried to read your comic story but w...Hi Room 3, we tried to read your comic story but we couldn't because the colour of the letters was tricky to see. We likes that you put your photos into the blog. We have been learning about speech marks and we saw some in your comic story. Thank you for sharing this with us.<br />Room 7Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-55747711574730369332015-07-27T10:49:12.809+12:002015-07-27T10:49:12.809+12:00I really like it but next time could you put dark ...I really like it but next time could you put dark colors? Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09964023394727674711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-77050349848286366002015-07-27T10:39:29.484+12:002015-07-27T10:39:29.484+12:00Wow amazing story I like the way you used the onom...Wow amazing story I like the way you used the onomatopoeia in your story but next time can you make your writing clear so we can read and that reminds me when me and my buddy Buzz made our comic amazing work on the COMIC!!! Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04370867785541498120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-35274512556849939532015-07-23T13:24:53.537+12:002015-07-23T13:24:53.537+12:00Awesome story but try to make the letters more c...Awesome story but try to make the letters more clear so we can see it By Jd you can also visit my blog at this link http://wisjay-daniel.blogspot.co.nz/Jay-Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12063913334414981390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-78944177052421158152015-07-23T13:24:34.209+12:002015-07-23T13:24:34.209+12:00Awesome story but try to make the letters more c...Awesome story but try to make the letters more clear so we can see it By Jd you can also visit my blog at this link http://wisjay-daniel.blogspot.co.nz/Jay-Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12063913334414981390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-18436145895718185862015-07-23T10:05:34.886+12:002015-07-23T10:05:34.886+12:00Hey room 3 I like how all of you guys created a co...Hey room 3 I like how all of you guys created a comic strip its really awesome it is creative and interesting maybe next time try do with a little bit sparkle oh and nice photo's for the comic stripVini Alfredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13003266501685624478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7062688729444236843.post-62063814496311420522015-07-23T09:53:52.058+12:002015-07-23T09:53:52.058+12:00This comment has been removed by the author.Amalani Mafileohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00244622722812647240noreply@blogger.com