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Wednesday, July 1, 2015

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34 comments:

  1. well done maybe you should add more pictures and you should not write replied cause the speech bubble will show who is talking

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  3. well done maybe you should add more pictures and you should not write replied cause the speech bubble will show who is talking i agree with sumaya!

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  4. Good job like how you used close up picture high shot and low shots and yeah I agree with Rachel and Samaya

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  5. Nice work it reminds me of a tv show when is your next page?

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  6. Good job like how you used close up picture high shot and low shots and yeah I agree with Rachel and Samaya

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  7. I like the way you use Onomatopoeia and Similes and expiration on your face that reminds me in my group got crash in a car crash.And I loved it I think other kids in the world will see this. From Nathaniel.

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  8. good story fanzeene but try to make the letters more clear so we can see

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  11. Hey room 3 I like how all of you guys created a comic strip its really awesome it is creative and interesting maybe next time try do with a little bit sparkle oh and nice photo's for the comic strip

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  12. Awesome story but try to make the letters more clear so we can see it By Jd you can also visit my blog at this link http://wisjay-daniel.blogspot.co.nz/

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  13. Awesome story but try to make the letters more clear so we can see it By Jd you can also visit my blog at this link http://wisjay-daniel.blogspot.co.nz/

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  14. Wow amazing story I like the way you used the onomatopoeia in your story but next time can you make your writing clear so we can read and that reminds me when me and my buddy Buzz made our comic amazing work on the COMIC!!!

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  15. I really like it but next time could you put dark colors?

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  16. Hi Room 3, we tried to read your comic story but we couldn't because the colour of the letters was tricky to see. We likes that you put your photos into the blog. We have been learning about speech marks and we saw some in your comic story. Thank you for sharing this with us.
    Room 7

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  17. good work i like how you did different shots but make the letters bigger so i can see but good work it was like a real comic

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  18. l liked the way you used onomatopoeia,i think you should work on the font for the writing because it's kind of hard to tell whats happening,But besides that you did great! using the onomatopoeia on where it needs to be,for e.g.c your falling and you crash so you put crash where you fell.
    By:Rachel.H

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  19. NICE WORK! yous guys did a great job on these comic strips I like the way yous used interesting pictures and different onomatopoeia next time yous should try not to use that much words but other than thath really great work keep it up

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  20. Good job I like the onomatopoeia but at the last picture or the first I couldn't read the speech bubble

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  21. Love it!I think that this is a really good comic because,it shows to not steal and also has the onomatopoeia and speech bubbles to go with the comic.I think next time we need to work on making the writing more clearer and shorter.
    Thanks
    Caroline

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  22. Good work i like how you used onomatopoeia and speech bubble.But you try useing different font

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  23. nice work i like how you use onomatopoeia and back round

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  24. Great work. I loved how you used high shots, low shots and close ups. I enjoyed the part how Franzene was holding the diamond. It reminds me when I got a gift from my aunty. She gave me a box that was full of shiny diamonds. They were fake but I felt like they were real. Have you received a gift from anyone?

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  25. Great job and I liked the idea how you used yourself for the photos instead of just finding random pictures to put on it.
    What would you do if someone gave you a crystal for your birthday. d:D
    by:Marick

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  26. Yes.Thank you Lucy.I think we did a good job but I think everyone is right with their opinion I mean,we do need to work on the fonts,and we do need to work on the color and the contrast but,I still think we did a good job and we had that opportunity to put all our idea's into this comic strip to make it better and better each time but,thanks for the feed back.
    Thanks:Caroline

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  27. Excellent work girls,I like the way you never used punctuation.punctuation. This reminds me of the time I made one.Can you make another page?It is really exciting.

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  28. Great work.I liked how how you used enough pictures in your comic and onomatopoeia's.
    next time try to make the words big enough

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  29. Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another comic because we might not be able to make another comic but,we will try our best.Thanks for giving me more work to work on and for the feed back.
    Thanks:Caroline

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  30. Umm Tugi,me and Franzene will try make another comic because we might not be able to make another comic but,we will try our best.Thanks for giving me more work to work on and for the feed back.
    Thanks:Caroline

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  31. Hi Room 3
    I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I wanna know what is your learning focus and what website did you use to make that EPIC comic

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  32. Hi Room 3
    I'm Atonio from CTK Mt Roskill and I wanna know what is your learning focus and what website did you use to make that EPIC comic

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    1. Hi Antonio. Thanks for your comment! The website is called Fotor, give it a try!

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  33. Hi Room 3! Wow what fantastic work!
    We love your sounds in the bubbles and would love to see you use even more :-)
    From Room 4 and Miss Bound

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