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Saturday, April 9, 2016

Work of the Week - Week 10

This week the Avengers reading group read a School Journal story called Monsoon Flood. Taliai has used this text to write a set of instructions about how to stay safe in a flood. 

HOW TO ESCAPE OF A FLOOD


Step 1: leave everything before you die and save yourself.

Step 2: Shout for help so someone can help you.

Step 3: Go to a safe place but a high place like a mountain or a place that's in our country.

Step 4: Instead of swimming and getting tired find something to grab on something and hoist on to it

10 comments:

  1. wow great work talai you have done good introductions that reminds me when my mom told me there was a flood last year next time try reread your work and have a look at number 4 theres some mistakes.

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  2. Good job Taliai! I like the way you put how to escape a flood in capital letters to make it serious I remember there was a colossal flood in the pacific islands in 2008 and recently there was a cyclone in Fiji. It looked really bad. Maybe you could be more specific by adding adverbs!

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  3. good job taliai for using good decribing words and great steps to foillow

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  4. good job taliai for using good decribing words and great steps to foillow

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    1. yes good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    2. Good job Taliai we had a flood in samoa in 2006 when I was born.

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    3. Good job Taliai we had a flood in samoa in 2006 when I was born.

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  5. good work taliai reminds me of the flood we had at Tonga but better luck nextntime

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  6. Good work Taliai that reminds me about the flood that was in tonga too maybe next time make the steps more serious. :) :)

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  7. Good work Taliai that reminds me about the flood that was in tonga too maybe next time make the steps more serious. :) :)

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