HOW TO ESCAPE OF A FLOOD
Step 1: leave everything before you die and save yourself.
Step 2: Shout for help so someone can help you.
Step 3: Go to a safe place but a high place like a mountain or a place that's in our country.
Step 4: Instead of swimming and getting tired find something to grab on something and hoist on to it
wow great work talai you have done good introductions that reminds me when my mom told me there was a flood last year next time try reread your work and have a look at number 4 theres some mistakes.
ReplyDeleteGood job Taliai! I like the way you put how to escape a flood in capital letters to make it serious I remember there was a colossal flood in the pacific islands in 2008 and recently there was a cyclone in Fiji. It looked really bad. Maybe you could be more specific by adding adverbs!
ReplyDeletegood job taliai for using good decribing words and great steps to foillow
ReplyDeletegood job taliai for using good decribing words and great steps to foillow
ReplyDeleteyes good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteGood job Taliai we had a flood in samoa in 2006 when I was born.
DeleteGood job Taliai we had a flood in samoa in 2006 when I was born.
Deletegood work taliai reminds me of the flood we had at Tonga but better luck nextntime
ReplyDeleteGood work Taliai that reminds me about the flood that was in tonga too maybe next time make the steps more serious. :) :)
ReplyDeleteGood work Taliai that reminds me about the flood that was in tonga too maybe next time make the steps more serious. :) :)
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