good job alani!!!I like that you used verses and you did let's start on,How about and what next
Good job Alani I think it should be a song!
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man alani you have done a good job and try put the meaning there because no one might know it and this reminds me when we did one like this but different work and
WOW Alani!!!! I really, really enjoyed how you had a lot of rhyming words and how you always started a sentence with a capital letter. It reminds me how I made poems with rhyming words, and I still do. Maybe next time, highlight the rhyming words to make more clear. But anyway great poem.
Great job Alani i love the way that you rhymed and made it better by making it have 3 rhymes i agree with krisina