This week we studied a poem called 'Bored to Death.' This poem joked about how the dinosaurs died because they had nothing to do. Here is Alani's version:
man alani you have done a good job and try put the meaning there because no one might know it and this reminds me when we did one like this but different work and
WOW Alani!!!! I really, really enjoyed how you had a lot of rhyming words and how you always started a sentence with a capital letter. It reminds me how I made poems with rhyming words, and I still do. Maybe next time, highlight the rhyming words to make more clear. But anyway great poem.
WOW Alani!!!! I really, really enjoyed how you had a lot of rhyming words and how you always started a sentence with a capital letter. It reminds me how I made poems with rhyming words, and I still do. Maybe next time, highlight the rhyming words to make more clear. But anyway great poem.
good job alani!!!I like that you used verses and you did let's start on,How about and what next
ReplyDeleteGood job Alani I think it should be a song!
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ReplyDeleteman alani you have done a good job and try put the meaning there because no one might know it and this reminds me when we did one like this but different work and
ReplyDeleteWOW Alani!!!! I really, really enjoyed how you had a lot of rhyming words and how you always started a sentence with a capital letter. It reminds me how I made poems with rhyming words, and I still do. Maybe next time, highlight the rhyming words to make more clear. But anyway great poem.
ReplyDeleteWOW Alani!!!! I really, really enjoyed how you had a lot of rhyming words and how you always started a sentence with a capital letter. It reminds me how I made poems with rhyming words, and I still do. Maybe next time, highlight the rhyming words to make more clear. But anyway great poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Alani i love the way that you rhymed and made it better by making it have 3 rhymes i agree with krisina
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