nice font and vocab.nice rhymes.
I luv the fonts and really good rhymes.
Yeah me too like the rhythms and and font
I love you described the petal using the word fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Would you want to be a stretcher bearer?
i like the story and similar to the stretcher bearer and a good poem for anzac
wow Buzz is like a poem master it really fits in with the poem Buzz will you make another poem about anything you choose?
i like how your poem ryhms
It is really amazing poem BUZZ.
I love how you described the petals using the words fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Maybe add in a bit more of alliteration and would you like to be a stretcher bearer?
I like the way you described,this reminds me when I was doing my Anzac poem,you should try making another one.Can you try adding more similes in your next poem?
This poem is very very cool and i like your rhyming words and i like the cool font and would you like to be in the army one day?
Great rhymes and great vocab.That reminds me when Silas was a stretcher bearer.Can you make another poem about a vehicle or your fsavourite foood?
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what do you mean by saying foood?
I really liked this poem Buzz - particularly the way you use fonts and vocabulary to contrast the poppies with what is going on around them.Barbara
I really like the fonts and the vocabulary you used for the poem. It reminds me of the story we read about Silas when he was a stretcher bearer. If you were a soldier and you went to the war what job would you want to be?
I really like the poem it made me think i was in the woods!!! But you should just stay with the same font!!! :)
Well done buzz
great poem buzzz really like how u used ryming words well done d:D
Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.It reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:Dby:Marick
I really like your rhymes and vocabulary