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Tuesday, June 9, 2015

ANZAC Poetry by Buzz

26 comments:

  1. nice font and vocab.nice rhymes.

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  2. I luv the fonts and really good rhymes.

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  3. Yeah me too like the rhythms and and font

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  4. I love you described the petal using the word fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Would you want to be a stretcher bearer?

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  5. i like the story and similar to the stretcher bearer and a good poem for anzac

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  6. I love you described the petal using the word fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Would you want to be a stretcher bearer?

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  7. wow Buzz is like a poem master it really fits in with the poem Buzz will you make another poem about anything you choose?

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  8. It is really amazing poem BUZZ.

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  9. It is really amazing poem BUZZ.

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  10. I love how you described the petals using the words fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Maybe add in a bit more of alliteration and would you like to be a stretcher bearer?

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  11. I like the way you described,this reminds me when I was doing my Anzac poem,you should try making another one.Can you try adding more similes in your next poem?

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  12. This poem is very very cool and i like your rhyming words and i like the cool font and would you like to be in the army one day?

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  13. Great rhymes and great vocab.
    That reminds me when Silas was a stretcher bearer.
    Can you make another poem about a vehicle or your fsavourite foood?

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    2. what do you mean by saying foood?

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  14. I really liked this poem Buzz - particularly the way you use fonts and vocabulary to contrast the poppies with what is going on around them.
    Barbara

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  15. I really like the fonts and the vocabulary you used for the poem. It reminds me of the story we read about Silas when he was a stretcher bearer. If you were a soldier and you went to the war what job would you want to be?

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  16. I really like the poem it made me think i was in the woods!!! But you should just stay with the same font!!! :)

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  17. great poem buzzz really like how u used ryming words well done d:D

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  18. Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
    It reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
    Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
    by:Marick

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  19. Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
    It reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
    Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
    by:Marick

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  20. Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
    It reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
    Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
    by:Marick

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  21. I really like your rhymes and vocabulary

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