I love how you described the petals using the words fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Maybe add in a bit more of alliteration and would you like to be a stretcher bearer?
I like the way you described,this reminds me when I was doing my Anzac poem,you should try making another one.Can you try adding more similes in your next poem?
I really like the fonts and the vocabulary you used for the poem. It reminds me of the story we read about Silas when he was a stretcher bearer. If you were a soldier and you went to the war what job would you want to be?
nice font and vocab.nice rhymes.
ReplyDeleteI luv the fonts and really good rhymes.
ReplyDeleteYeah me too like the rhythms and and font
ReplyDeleteI love you described the petal using the word fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Would you want to be a stretcher bearer?
ReplyDeletei like the story and similar to the stretcher bearer and a good poem for anzac
ReplyDeleteI love you described the petal using the word fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Would you want to be a stretcher bearer?
ReplyDeletewow Buzz is like a poem master it really fits in with the poem Buzz will you make another poem about anything you choose?
ReplyDeletei like how your poem ryhms
ReplyDeletei like how your poem ryhms
ReplyDeleteIt is really amazing poem BUZZ.
ReplyDeleteIt is really amazing poem BUZZ.
ReplyDeleteI love how you described the petals using the words fragile,and also talking about stretcher bearers.Maybe add in a bit more of alliteration and would you like to be a stretcher bearer?
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described,this reminds me when I was doing my Anzac poem,you should try making another one.Can you try adding more similes in your next poem?
ReplyDeleteThis poem is very very cool and i like your rhyming words and i like the cool font and would you like to be in the army one day?
ReplyDeleteGreat rhymes and great vocab.
ReplyDeleteThat reminds me when Silas was a stretcher bearer.
Can you make another poem about a vehicle or your fsavourite foood?
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Deletewhat do you mean by saying foood?
DeleteI really liked this poem Buzz - particularly the way you use fonts and vocabulary to contrast the poppies with what is going on around them.
ReplyDeleteBarbara
I really like the fonts and the vocabulary you used for the poem. It reminds me of the story we read about Silas when he was a stretcher bearer. If you were a soldier and you went to the war what job would you want to be?
ReplyDeleteI really like the poem it made me think i was in the woods!!! But you should just stay with the same font!!! :)
ReplyDeleteWell done buzz
ReplyDeletegreat poem buzzz really like how u used ryming words well done d:D
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
by:Marick
Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
by:Marick
Great poem Buzz and great rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteIt reminded me of Silas the stretcher bearer.
Would you like to be a stretcher bearer? d:D
by:Marick
I really like your rhymes and vocabulary
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