In Room three we have been looking at figurative and poetic language. Below is an extract from Nathaniel. We'd love your comments and feedback.
As yellow as a sun the banana rest on the fruit like a yellow hearted long stick.
The banana is happy because of the smile on his face.
Think of the yellow skin as a shield in disguise protecting the food from the flies.
The rancid banana brought bats back behind Batman's babies so the babies brought the rancid banana as Batman's baton.
Ok it smiled at me.